Sunday, October 5, 2008

the first rhyming lines i wrote myself


So hello people...!!!!
i know not many of you would be reading this blog ever.....
but this is a place where i am jotting down the thoughts i hav ein my mind just for my satisfaction...
so now i present the first poem i wrote in my life.It is senselessly stupid wothout any meaning...
still take a look if you wish to....

#YE DIL#
ankhon se keh de ye jo mann me aaye...
apni to duniya ye khud hi banaye...
kisi ki na parwah,na koi fikar hai
ye dil apna saala bada besabar hai...
to...kya karein......??????
hum is dil ka...
na maane,na jaane hai ye kuch bhi...
batao,kya karein.....?????
hum is dil ka.....jo soche hai baatein apne matlab ki...

Jab bhi ye chahe,ye kuch bhi kar jaaye...
ye dil to kisi ke kaabu me na aaye...
ye kuch bhi kar le,isey kya darr hai.....!!!
kahi hain nigahein...kahi pe nazar hai...
par kya karein..........????
hunm is dil kaaa...
bin jiske ye life nahi chalti...
akhir kya karein.........???
hum is dil ka...
na jaane kya hoga baari abki????
kya karein...
kya karein...
kya karein...

2 comments:

pooja said...

ur first poem was good yar.atleast better than mine!

dhawal said...

mayb...!!!
u cnt compare poems...
bt criusly ....i gues ths was my worst..
hehe!